Friday, October 12, 2012
From reading romance novels, I've gathered the author is expected to give a thorough description of how the characters look. On the other hand, we have books like the Harry Potter series. All we know about Harry is he has untidy black hair, light eyes and glasses; Ron- red hair and freckles; Hermione- bushy hair and big teeth.
Does one work better than the other? How you handle character descriptions seems to have more to do with your genre. In my opinion, less is better. You should give the readers enough information to kick start their imaginations.
Sometimes, all you need it a one sentence description. For Dark Fantasy books, though, it's kinda tricky. More often than not, the POV character is some otherworldly being. Whenever I tell people my characters aren't human, the first thing they ask is- what do they look like?
In the past, I got feedback that the reader couldn't picture my characters. I used to give bits and pieces of physical traits along the way like "she threw her long hair out her face," or "she pulled back her shoulders to try and look taller than she was."
If the reader doesn't have a firm grasp on what your character looks like yet you keep reinforcing they aren't human then...the story loses something. Now, I give two or three sentences of physical characteristics when they first appear then throw in more details as the story develops.
To make things even more fun, genre is not the only thing to consider. If your story is in first person or close third, the description of another character will be marred by the protagonists own biases.
How do you present your character's physical appearance?
Auden is a dark fantasy author. As a kid, she created her own books by folding several construction papers in half and stapling them down the middle, adding her own illustrations. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn’t get away from writing. Darkness and dark thing have always fascinated her.